A month back, while I was crossing the road to take an auto for getting back to home from office. A hand stretched out towards me for help. I looked up to see the owner of the hand. An elderly woman of my mother’s age was murmuring something that I couldn’t figure out. The only thing that hit me at that time was to hold her hand. I gave my hand to her and she held it. The entwined fingers made two hands one and we crossed the road. As soon as we reached the other end she left my hand but she left a mark on my soul. Both of us smiled at each other she thanked me in her language that I didn’t understand. But her eyes spoke volumes, showcasing the love and gratitude. This one incident hit me so hard that I decided to write about it here on my blog in the form of poetry.
Amidst the crowd of numerous hands holding can of worms,
The hand of humanity stands aloof, not following the set of norms.
A hand which sets humans apart from the other mortals,
Is now long forgotten, in the chase of morsel.
It cries lying under the heap of ruins,
And its red tears are making the melancholic tunes.
The love for the worldly affairs has stimulated its slow death.
Sucking away its soul and leaving it to struggle for the normal breath.
It’s time to realize the heinous crime we all have done,
Killing the human hands with the power of gatling gun.
Once again we need to explore our concise,
Yes, we need to revive the dying love and pay the price.
The only thing we all can give to our mother earth,
A promise to constitute a world of humanity that will increase its worth.
Note : This is my entry for the challenge Giveaway Contest!
The challenge has been thrown by Blair 🙂 . Do check her out , she has a beautiful collection of poetry with different flavors of emotions .
Loved your poem
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Thanks 🙂
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great work by helping the elderly woman and very good message conveyed in this poem. Beautiful creation… helping the needy is the biggest service… 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Your lovely poem and act of kindness blesses me so much Neerja. This is one way we can change our world and make a difference. Thank you.
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Thank you so much 🙂 I agree
…these Small random act of kindness will help us in making our world a better place 🙂
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This is so beautifully weaved into words! How small acts of kindness can fill our hearts with happiness.:)
kudos for a lovely poem with a great message 🙂
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Thank you so much for understanding the depth of the message 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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An amazing piece! Excellent work. There is inspiration everywhere if we just take the time to see it. I have a deep passion for supporting the needy, and that support doesn’t always come in the form of money or possessions. A simple smile, conversation or touch if love and effectivness can be the difference maker in someone’s else’s life; amd provide just the inspiration needed to author a work of art such as this. Kudos.
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Thank you so much 🙂 very well said the act of love couldn’t be defined by monetary help or gifts 🙂 its much deeper sometime people don’t need your money …they need someone who could feel them and be compassionate towards them 🙂
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Exactly. Love is a way of being. When you are being love, it shows up in everything you do. People feel that energy without a single word, or act.
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So true 🙂
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Neerja, I am proud of this post and also proud of you 🙂 Keep shining 😉
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Thank you soooo much 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
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Really touched by your expressions in the story…glad you shared with us.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Such an easy thing to do, yet how often overlooked?
You gave her a wealth of love that day.
Melinda
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Well said 🙂 I don’t know of that but one thing is certain this gesture of mine made me immensely happy 🙂
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Happiness often results from helping others!
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So true 🙂
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Lovely moment followed by an outstanding rhythm, Neeraja 🙂 Loved it!
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Thank you so much dear 🙂
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You’re welcome, my dear friend 🙂
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Whether for a contest or not… This one deserves a bow Neerja.. You are amazing in poetry too.. The words are sharp and it really hits the heart..
Lets give a hand to humanity.. 🙂
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Thank soooooo much 🙂 You and sri made my day 😀 ..overwhelmed by the love you have given me ❤ :-*
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Always there.. 🙂 Keep writing and do wonders with your pen.. 🙂
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thank for having this faith 🙂
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A standing ovation for this one!!! I really had no idea that you were such a brilliant poetess….I am awestruck at this moment! My words fail Neerja….Too, too, too good buddy! And a thumping YES to the issue raised!!!
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Thank so much honey ❤ .. Your appreciation means a lot to me 🙂 Sometimes a single incident become catalyst for the series of thoughts and you have to pour them out to feel free 🙂 I am glad you understood my feelings 🙂 I always think that we need to do our bit of effort for humanity 🙂
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Absolutely right and this outpouring was brilliant!
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thanks a ton :)<3
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