I stand by window pane,
Looking down at the lonely lane.
I notice a dark vague image,
Suddenly, I feel an internal scrimmage.
A devil in god’s disguise,
And how I fall in love, with those mischievous black eyes.
Abruptly, I sensed a pang in my heart,
The traitor was once again playing his part.
Collecting myself with courage, I drew the curtain,
But my mind was still uncertain.
This my entry for Limerick Poetry Challenge
This challenge has been started by Rashmi of Mind and Life Matters!
Loved it….:)
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Thank you 🙂
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Inspiring 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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Very nice, it made me think and search for what it meant to me, full of meaning!
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🙂 Thank you so much 🙂 It means alot 🙂
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Good poem… though am not very sharp at understanding prose 😦
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Thank you 🙂 you need to read more poetry to understand it in much better way 🙂
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Such an amazing piece Neerja. “A devil in god’s disguise” What words. Loved it. This poem has got an inherent power, I feel somewhere. Loved it.
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Thank you so much tejas 🙂 I wrote poetry after a long time 🙂 And as I read the word fall then the story kept coming thereafter 🙂
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It is a great effort. Keep it up 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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This is such a beautiful poem.
I feel it’s so beautiful and profound at the same time and lovely selection of image as well!
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 sometimes are like making things grey 🙂
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What did you say? 😛
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Sorry I bluffed .. I meant sometimes I like making things grey 😛
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Hahaha LOL and you do it brilliantly. Thanks 🙂 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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NJ you are so creative and lovely ❤ Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you so much Jennifer 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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You drew the curtain on time 😉
Nice Limerick.👍
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yeah ..intelligent me 😛 😉 and thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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You stunned me….What a kitty bag of talents galore! I am so lucky that I know you! Keep rocking the show girl- you were born for this 🙂
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Aha …That was nice compliment 😉 Wrote poetry after long time 🙂 I was thinking of writing it for so long but nothing came out suddenly rashmi came up with this challenge and I knew this was the push I needed …so here it was my limerick 😉 Why don’t you take up the challenge and write something 🙂 It will be new push for you dear 🙂
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Aww…
The poet Neerja…
You are awesome sweetheart.. ❤
Keep on trying poetry… 🙂
Another wonderful poet like Tejas Bhai is found!! 🙂
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Blush – Blush 😛
Love you ❤ and thank you ❤
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Wonderful! Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you so much 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
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Neerja Di 😍😍💋💋 You’re a beautiful poet! It was a simple concept, yet brought out wonderfully. Great job, my sister! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Deepu you here 😉 pleasant surprise :p thank you so much love ❤ I ventured into writing through poetry only but writing memoirs didn't gave me time for writing poems 🙂
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I check your blog frequently, sis 🙂 ❤ 💋💋 You've a flair for writing poems, keep them coming too! 😍😍 Experiment with various kinds of writing to experience the various thrills and joy that comes with them 😉 Love you!! Don't forget to stay awesome ❤ ❤ ❤ 💋💋💋💋😍😍😍😍
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yeah I know but I thought you must be busy with the fourth book 🙂
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Not yet, Neerja Di 🙂 I’ll be caught up only after I make the rough draft 🙂 It’ll take some time 🙂
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Oh great 🙂 that means I will be able to read your beautiful comments on my posts 🙂
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😍😍😍💋💋💋👍👍👍 You’ll always have them, sis ❤
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🙂 love you ❤
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Love you too, my sister 💋💋💋
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Your limerick says a very good story! Brilliant! Glad you decided to participate! 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 it was because of you that I wrote this poetry 🙂
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You create a feeling of emotional torment between love and desire. Although the poem is unique, the sentiments are experienced by many people all over the world. Well done.
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Thank you so much 🙂 I am glad that you understood the emotions behind the poem 🙂
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Pretty amazing!
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Thanks 🙂
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👏👏👏 Very Good!
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Thank you darling ❤
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