Limerick Challenge Week 4:Mist

~ NJ

PIC

Misty dreams scattered around

Piercing, my pale body with the glasses on ground.

Its unbearable, an inevitable pain

I still try to stop the flowing blood but all in vain.

Then I felt how pathetic it is, to be blood bound.

Rashmi has continued her Limerick Poetry challenge for the year 2016, this is my entry for this week’s challenge

29 thoughts on “Limerick Challenge Week 4:Mist”

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    1. Hey Buddy I am all good 😀 Just thought of writing something grey 🙂 May be because I was reading a thriller book that triggered the grey button 😛 I am touched 🙂 thank you for being there 🙂

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      1. I can’t imagine may be I am wrong .
        You have been always positive and full of life.
        Don’t read thriller, may be I am over reacting . But it’s scaring .
        Any way you write very well be it grey. !

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      2. Yeah it happens with me too 🙂 somebody who is always positive if suddenly turns black or grey I too become worried 🙂 SO its ok 🙂 I generally dont read thriller now but it was a gift 😉 So I read it 😀 Thank you for the compliments 🙂

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    1. Yeah I tried to be grey this time 😉 and it took me more time to get this picture than writing the limerick 😉 I hope people relate to it 🙂 thank you 🙂 ❤

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