The limp body was lying in the pool of blood, waiting to be picked up from the floor by someone who will care enough. The blood wasn’t dark red, it was coral which made it feel like as if the coral reef was bleeding instead of a human body. People, as usual, started to gather around, most of them were there to witness what death looks like, for others, it was mere gossip that they would talk about on their dinner table. And then there are always a few curious ones, who want to know what exactly happened that led to this situation, but none of them cared enough to touch the body. They all assumed that nothing was left, that the light has gone out, and the only thing they could do is call the ambulance to pick up the body. Yes, now it was just a body, ready for burial in the graveyard or might be cremated, who knows, after all, no one came claiming it yet.
The spirit of the body was hovering over it, wondering what the commotion was all about. Why suddenly all these people were interested in her. People who wouldn’t even return her smile were now asking each other about her existence. How come, she became the talk of the town by one act of pursuit. Most of them were whispering, so she couldn’t decipher what exactly they thought had happened to her. The only thing that she kept wondering was why the so-called caring people, who would go mad about run over body of a dog on the road wouldn’t even dare to touch her body which still has few last breaths to take on this mortal world.
She chuckled at the synchronicity of the situation, no one cared enough when she was there, existing with her breaths, and no one cared enough now when she was ceasing to exist with her last breaths. The only thing they were determined to know was whether It was TAKEN or GIVEN?
PS : The story came from the Limerick that I wrote long time back for a challenge.
Although a sad reality, these are a phenomenon when end draws in closer to our wits…amazing piece and the Limerick too, fabulous!ππ
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Thank you so much π glad you liked the both π
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This is quite a story and so well written NJ! π
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thanks alot jenny β€
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Great story. Sad and awful but things like these do happen.
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Thanks , and I agree it’s a sad reality π
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You are getting ready to become a full time writer.. i love it. ππ
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Thank you so much β€β€ Please keep reading my stories π
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Bitter reality babe: so many people don’t care till someone dies of mysterious causes. Or under mysterious circumstances. And then, people forget and move on.
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Totally agree on that we simply at times don’t care till someone is there and once it’s gone we say they should have told usπ
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Exactly. No wonder humans are dying fast.
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Right, humanity is dying a slow death.
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What hits me hard here, is how true this story can be for many of us. Wonderfully written! π
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So true, and it came from that real place π
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The narration is fleshed with gusto and stroking on what the spirit goes through as the end becomes closer. Brilliant.
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Thank you so much for such a profound feedback ππ
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Such a pleasure NJ:)
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Good story. A pleasure to read. Taken for granted during life, many spirits must experience this sad realization.
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Thank you so much ππ indeed you can never say whether the life was taken away or they themselves gave it, afterall both are similar yet different π
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True. Have a beautiful ending to your week.
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Thanks π wish you the same π
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